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19 July 2008 @ 07:19 pm
Break The Ice (NC-17)  
Title: Break the Ice
Written By: Perriwynkkle
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: HoMin (Yunho x Changmin)
Genre: SMUTTY SMUT SMUT
Length: One-Shot
Disclaimer: Do not own tre boys, SM does....dammit.

Summary:
Ooh, looks like we're alone now
You ain't gotta be scared
Where you going now?
I'm a have to defrost on ya
Let's get it blazin'
We can turn the heat up if you wanna
Turn the lights down low if you wanna
Just wanna move you
But you're frozen
That's what I'm saying

Let me break the ice
Allow me to get you right
Let you warm up to me
Baby I can make you feel (Hot, Hot, Hot)
Let me break the ice
Allow me to get you right
Let you warm up to me
Baby I can make you feel (Hot, Hot, Hot)

So you warming up yet?
 
Break the Ice - Britney Spears

Author's Note: Yes, I took the damn story from a Britney song....but hey, I am kind of a closet fan of hers in reality. This song is just so addictive with it's beats and everything...it got me thinking about this story and well.....here it is!  I wrote this in about.....15 minutes, for anyone that is curious since I have been really freaking busy these last two days being my mother's bitch since she has had my aunts over. LOL!  Hope you all enjoy!
 
A pull on a coat lapel, tug on a holed button, the slide of a heated hand on a wet cheek.
His wet hair was plastered to his head, the once perfectly styled coif now an unruly mop of caramel brown. The small droplets of water dripped slowly down his curved nose from a wayward hair strand, the rain from outside almost seeming to flow from inside his heated skin. You watch as his dirt stained coat falls heavily to the floor, and his dark brown eyes follow it’s decent, then back up over the soaking clothes encasing your sizzling body.
Words were forgotten as you tugged him back to your lips with a hand against white t-shirt, the fabric see-through from the storm. There you kissed him, his lips tasting of rain water and vanilla, the wallpaper of the entranceway rough on your palm near his head.
His tongue was a hot invitation against your teeth and gums, the dueling of your muscles forcing a small saliva trail down the side of your chin.
You pulled away, his eyes shone gold, and the hand that ran down your still clothed chest rang feelings loud and clear.  
Grabbing his neck, you kissed him quickly, unbuttoning and pulling down his oh-so-tight jeans to a quivering knee. He was hard, his cock standing red and proud, shining evidence of his enjoyment in their processes lingering on the tip. You smiled seductively, watching him as he leaned against the hallway’s dark wall, the only light coming from the rain splattered sunroof, a tinted and foggy grey. His wet white t-shirt clung to his well defined chest even as it had been pushed up halfway, his dark nipples only just confined.
He was breathing hard, panting, large hands rubbing a tan stomach and strong, naked thighs, forcefully neglecting a weeping, begging erection jutting out from dark black curls.
You hear yourself moan into the empty apartment as you fall against the opposite wall, your eyes never faltering from his water soaked body.  
Opening your pants, you delicately pull out your dick, the purple head rearing forward towards its known lover. Yet you don’t move, keeping your needy body up against the cold, white wall, your eyes the only connection to pleasure.
He realizes this, your lover, and he starts to rub his hand over his large erection, the long fingers wrapping and pulling. The other hand soon disappears behind his body, the quiet gasp letting you know where it had been headed.
You watch him, your eyes devouring the long expanses of glowing skin, the hands roaming over a thick cock and two well sized balls, rolling and tugging, pinching, and pulling. He starts to buck, his hips thrusting up into air and falling back to the wall, a light thump echoing over to your ears with each jut forward and back.
Your hips also start to dance, yet your hands stay flat against the wall, as you pump and grind into the unfaltering oxygen around you.
You feel your shirt start to bunch under your ribcage from the friction against the wall, your open pants falling slightly down your wide hips as you jut into the air.
He watches you as this happens, his eyes like knives of pleasure stabbing and prodding at your groin…pulling you towards ultimate satisfaction.
His hand moves faster and you continue to observe as he comes, his hot cum flowing out from under his palm, landing on the floor.
He pulls the hand out from behind, smearing a long string of cum across his inner thigh and through his dark pubes.
The moan you elicit sounds almost like a sob as he brings the fingers up to his mouth to lick them clean.
You know you are done for as the pleasure runs through your body, collecting and spurting out through your cock.
The silver streams of cum dribbling down your dick and onto the hardwood floor as your lover’s eyes glint greedily in the dim light.
“Delicious.” He whispers, licking the tip of a pointer finger.
You nod, watching as he comes over, kissing you lightly with swollen lips.
“You are amazing.” You say as you grab the back of his head, running your hands through short brown locks.
“I try.” He replies, smiling innocently, “I love you Yunho.”
You smile back, pulling him into a hug,
 “Love you too Changmin.”
 
-FIN

Comments are appreciated, thanks for reading!
 
 
Current Mood: crankycranky
Current Music: Break The Ice - Britney Spears
 
 
 
emda: Hominemda on July 20th, 2008 02:58 am (UTC)
O.O
I knew where I live is hot but... GAAAh why is so suffocating after reading this????
hot hot hot... I should go and take a shower.
damn!
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 03:11 am (UTC)
If you need a shower, that may be the only cure!!! XDDD

Hotness is good yes?
emda: Hominemda on July 20th, 2008 03:13 am (UTC)
not the only cure but at least will help LOL
hotness is more than good is GREATLY AWESOME!!!!!
Stephanietheresa_lynne on July 20th, 2008 03:18 am (UTC)
Where are you? DDDD:

*reads*
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 03:24 am (UTC)
I'm here bb! *flails*
Stephanietheresa_lynne on July 20th, 2008 03:24 am (UTC)
Wow. Well, that was almost too smutty. XDDD Even for a seasoned smut-lover such as myself. *fans self*
Yuxiyuxo on July 20th, 2008 04:28 am (UTC)
WOOHOO. JERKING OFF ON WALLS DRIPPING WET FROM RAINWATER. WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

WOO WOO WOO WOO WOOT. LMFAOOOOO.

I AM LIKE. NOT EVEN HALF FUNCTIONAL RIGHT NOW. LMFAO. ASLFJ;LAKJOIEJLJLKFASDF

THEY SHOULD FUCK, I THINK. 8DDDDDDDDDDDDDD XDDDD

perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 05:20 am (UTC)
They should fuck? Yes, they should...and soon.

Thanks for reading!
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOW: hosufiat_amorfati on July 20th, 2008 06:56 am (UTC)
did they just watched each other jacking off and come like that???? Awesome writing~~~

i.need.showers and a homin icon for this comm XD!

(is it weird to know which person is which just by descriptions? You're good coz sometimes I get confused like that)
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 09:10 pm (UTC)
Yes they did just come by watching each other, it was more than just a sexual connection...it was emotional...LOL!

Thanks, I try! Thanks for reading!
kibummielove on July 20th, 2008 07:26 am (UTC)
GOODNESS. MY OHMYGOD. OHMY. *dies*

THEY CLIMAX JUST BY LOOKING AT EACH OTHER.
THATS PURE LOVE AND LUST AND JUST ABOUT EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN RIGHT THERE THERE THERE!!! OMG

i am requested for a sequeeeeelllllll! *begs on knees*

please. :3
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 09:09 pm (UTC)
Sequal? I don't know if I could form an entire sequal with just that....ehhh...I can try though.

I am glad you read it and thank you!
Quiet_Heartachequiet_heartache on July 20th, 2008 12:23 pm (UTC)
oh my. i feel a little...dazed XD
in a good way i think?!
homin wet from a storm...*drools*

thanks
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 09:08 pm (UTC)
dazed eh? Can you be dazed in a good way? LOL!

Wet + tshirts = very good!

thank you for reading!
genna: yunho2pinkgirl9388 on July 20th, 2008 11:00 pm (UTC)
Have I told you how long its been since I last read smut? Well it's been a while, and you just HAD to remind me how much I like reading them! XD You made jerking off much hotter than some smut I've read. And HoMin too! Just so hot *______*
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on July 20th, 2008 11:05 pm (UTC)
GENNA-BEANZ!!!! *glomps*

Smut is a fun experiance now ain't it?

Jerking off is fun too, especially when it is with someone you love....*giggles*

Yunho's Honey Funny Bunnykuro_wolf on December 25th, 2008 05:07 pm (UTC)
Its raining here rite now.
Oh the irony! LOL!