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16 December 2008 @ 09:38 pm
One Question (Breathless Romance Series)  
Title: One Question (Breathless Romance Series)
Written By: Perriwynkkle
Rating: PG
Pairing: HoMin
Length: One-shot, 1/1
Disclaimer: SM owns the boys.

Summary:
"To you, I would give the world.
With you, I'd never be cold,
Cause I feel like when I love you,
It's alright.
I know it's right.
And the songbirds
keep singing like they
know the score.
And I love you, I love you, I love you,
Like never before."

Songbird - Eva Cassidy

A/N: So I knew une_topaze really wanted the "Breathless Romance" series to continue. So my dear une_topaze, here is the part I wrote just for you! I really hope you like it, and to all my other readers, I hope you enjoy it as well. I hope I wrote this well, even though I have never experianced or witnessed this kind of event. I also hope this brings a warm light into everyone's cold winter days. (At least for us unlucky people in the Northern hemisphere. LOL!) Enjoy!

OH BTW, if you haven't listened to that song up there "Songbird" by Eva Cassidy, you are really missing out on one AMAZING song.


The sun was shining, streaming in through your frosted windows, illuminating your plain white sheets a pure, angelic white around your limbs.
A sigh was all you could muster as the heat from the warm rays hit your caramel skin, shooting shadows across your bare chest.
Your glimmering brown eyes seemed to turn reflexively towards your lover's lying form. His right arm slung limp over his curving hip and the sheets fell from off his large chest as he turned to face up, his lips a subtle pink, his lashes curling up softly against his cheeks.
Your heart skipped, the thumping stumbling on a lover's curb in your arteries.
You couldn't blink, feared that he was only an illusion, a frame of your longing fantasies come to wonderful, heavenly life.
Waking him, what good would that do?
Well, then you could ask him.
Ask him the one question that had been frozen on your tongue for the past 3 years.
But god you were so frightened of the words.
Frightened of the power they held, of the heartbreak they caused, yet the happiness they could as well.
Nothing was ever simple was it.
But it could be if...if you could just shut your conscious up.
Banish the fears away and turn to him, the man beside you, his hair glowing in the sunlight, and ask him those few simple words?
Would he accept your bargain or would he run faster than a scared rabbit towards the door?
You closed your eyes against the bright yellow light now melting the frost, the water falling like crystal droplets down a diamond face, sparkling, falling, leaving their glittering trail.
Your hands shook as you reached out for the bedside drawers, opening the wooden cubby and pulling out the small velvet gray box.
It was soft against your fingertips, smooth and slick yet warm and inviting.
Shit.
You couldn't do it.
You sighed, the sound defeated and angry against your nostrils.
“Changmin?” he asked quietly from around your turned back, your eyes opening all that little bit wider.
You cleared your throat, “Good morning.” you said, your back still protectively hiding the box trapped between your fingers.
“Good morning.” he replied, questioning in his voice, “What are you doing?”
You wanted to cringe, “Just...uhm...I...”
You realized he was right behind you as you stuttered, his sweet breath trailing warm into your ear as he kissed your shoulder.
“What have you got there?”
He just had to ask, and you just had to answer.
This was your chance.
You turned, your breath stopping as he appeared in your eyes, the most beautiful man, the most wonderful man, you had ever known.
“Uhm, shit, I don't really know how to say this.” you said, your voice not wanting to flow smoothly, “You know I love you right?”
He nodded. A good sign.
You continued, “And you love me right?”
He nodded again, a curious smile tugging at the corners of his lips.
“Well, I have been wanting to ask this question...and now just seemed like the right time.”
He nodded again, had he gone mute?
You cleared your throat, was it hot in here?
Your hands shaking, you unraveled your sweaty palm from around the velvet box, opening the small lid in swift succession.
Glittering in the sun, the smooth white gold band appeared, and your heart felt like was going to burst from your chest.
You watched as he sat, quiet against the sheets, the sunlight getting brighter each waiting second.
“Changmin...I...oh my...I thought...” he stuttered, his hand rubbing down his face, pulling the soft skin.
“Holy shit.”
You nodded this time, smiling nervously, “Jung Yunho...I ask this as your lover, your friend, your confidant...” you took a deep breath, “Will you marry me?”
He looked at you, he looked at the ring, he looked out the window.
Please say yes, you thought, oh please say yes.
“I...Jesus Changmin...” he smiled, a chuckle breaking through the silence, “YES!!!”
You couldn't help it as the relief seemed to pour out of every pore on every inch of skin you had as you pulled the ring out of the box and slipped in gently onto his long finger.
You watched as Yunho pulled up his fist to eye the small ring, smiling as he smiled back at you, both of you stunned speechless.
“Changmin, wow, this ring is amazing.” he gushed, legs crossed in front of him, “You really impress me sometimes, you know that.”
You couldn't help but laugh, “How is that?”
“Well,” he started, “You managed to get a ring that isn't incredibly girly...” you laughed again, pulling a hand up to rest it on his knee, “You also managed to propose in a way that wasn't too girly,” you felt like kissing him, yet you still slightly wanted to punch him, “And...” he leaned in closer, “You made me fall in love with you all over again.”
He kissed you, the embrace warm, soft, and slow.
Pulling away, he ran his fingers down your arm, the tips tickling your biceps, “I love you so much Shim Changmin, I would love to marry you.”
Your heart seemed to do a tap dance inside your chest, “That's good.”
He kissed you once again, a swift peck.

“So...” he asked, “Whose going to be the girl?”


- FIN

COMMENTS ARE LOVED SO VERY VERY MUCH!

 
 
Current Mood: indescribable
Current Music: Songbird - Eva Cassidy
 
 
 
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOW: hominfiat_amorfati on December 17th, 2008 06:14 am (UTC)
MINE? THIS IS MINE?? ALL THIS FLUFFY, FULL OF WONDERFUL CHANGMIN FAIL IS MINE?

*tears up* you wrote for this series again.
Thank you

for me
Thank you

They finally belong to each other legally
Thank you

PLEASE DO NOT STOP WRITING THIS SERIES. *cries so hard at the fluff and romance and love*

ILOVEYOU, YOU KNOW THAT RIGHT??? COZ I'M TOO STUCK UP FOR ANYTHING BELOW NC-17 NOWADAYS BUT YOU MAKE THIS PG-HOMIN WITH "AFTERSEX" GLOW.

I don't know what I'm saying anymore. OMG, I LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ♥♥♥♥♥♥

(computer is back?)
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 07:48 am (UTC)
*huggles*

Aw, I love you too! You are one of my most dedicated fans, and I really appreciate all the wonderful comments you have given me over the past few stories. ^-^

I am glad you like my PG stuff, since sometimes my smut sense doesn't work as good as other times. LOL!

Computer is not back, I have a new computer! I bought a brand new computer last Friday...so yeah, $1000 now gone, yet I can still write my heart out!

Your story was the first story I wrote on my new computer too! Woot!

And...you are very very welcome!
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOWfiat_amorfati on December 17th, 2008 08:02 am (UTC)
*attaches* Now that you have a new lappie, there's no excuse not to churn out homin for us XD j/k.

Oh, maybe your smut bunny is on Christmas vacation D; I can handle PG when it comes to homin~ yeah, I'm weird like that?

I'm happy that you have me in mind when you write with your new computer ♥

BTW, totally forget to say that Yunho should grow his hair and be the bride. LMAO! So the next story will be their "wedding night" I pressume? XD
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 08:07 am (UTC)
Next story....actually...I am writing it as we speak...not the wedding night though....*wiggles eyebrows* Can you guess? Heehee!

There is excuses....like I got caught in the never ending battle between mayonaise and mustard on sandwiches.

Smut bunny come back!!!

Would it please you to know the next chapter has some smut? *smiles innocently*
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOWfiat_amorfati on December 17th, 2008 08:20 am (UTC)
Stop teasing me!!! 8D

OMG, are they having a post-proposal call-in-sick-have-sex-in-bed-all-day-long???? hahahaha, does this mean it's going to be my bedtime read? ♥

smut bunny makes temp appearance because she love Lyne, hahaha. *feeds bunny cookies*

Is the mayo and mustard your muse for this chapter? 8D
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 08:32 am (UTC)
Sex....yes....when....heehee...who knows? LOL! I love being evil!

Bedtime read, yes.

Mayo and mustard, no.

Am I writing this to watch you squirm, yes. LOL! AHAHAHAHA!
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 08:58 am (UTC)
Wait...won't be posted tonight...I need to get up early! >.<

But I promise I will try to post it in the next few days!
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOW: chunlovefiat_amorfati on December 17th, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
*pats* Take your time with the next chapters, I don't mind waiting coz I know it will be worth the wait ^0^

yes, you're evil but I love you still
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 06:23 pm (UTC)
*hearts and hugs*
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perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 07:49 am (UTC)
Your welcome!

And hey...you never know...maybe dresses won't be a part of the scheme? *wiggles eyebrows* Naked wedding anyone? LOL!
紫のチャンミン: MinHo always here for youkurogoma on December 17th, 2008 08:56 am (UTC)
i love this homin series you had written, and hope inspiration will allow you to continue writing it.

i backtracked and re-read some of the other chapters and chance upon something yunho said in the first one ~ about how love just happens and one doesn't really know when that is ~ and wondered how did that happen with the homin, esp. ince min claimed in the same chapter that he never had romantic thoughts before about yunho until a certain time.

anyway, love this, esp since min is the one proposing. love a min who takes the initative.


perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 06:23 pm (UTC)
Maybe later on in the series I can write about the time they both knew they loved each other. Thanks for the idea! XD

Thanks so much for reading!
紫のチャンミン: MinHo in the studiokurogoma on December 18th, 2008 09:34 am (UTC)
LOL i was expecting you to give me the answer in your comment back, but yeah! for possible future chp in this series. that's even better. :D
Sierra: MinHoHeartrivium7fold on December 17th, 2008 03:47 pm (UTC)
I was all bubbly and warm and giggling and then I got to the end
“So...” he asked, “Whose going to be the girl?”

and stared laughing hysterically!
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on December 17th, 2008 06:22 pm (UTC)
Heehee, I planned that ending to kind of just end on a funny note! I mean, there is so much fluff you need some laughter at the end. ^-^

Thanks for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it!
Yunho's Honey Funny Bunnykuro_wolf on December 21st, 2008 04:11 pm (UTC)
HAHAHAHAH!!!
I love the ending! ^^
Overall i was rooting for Minnie, hoping leader-shii wud say yes too! Heheehhee
Lovely dude! Simply lovely. <3
aniprincess_13aniprincess_13 on December 22nd, 2008 01:13 pm (UTC)
ROFL at the list line :P

Cute fic :)