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16 February 2009 @ 08:53 pm
Take My Breath Away (Pre-BR)  
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*this beautiful poster made by my lovely and talented friend une_topaze!!!

Title: Take My Breath Away
Series: Breathless Romance
Arc: Breathless Romance Arc/Series
Rating: NC-17 (for language and sex)
Pairing: HoMin (Yunho x Changmin)
Length: 10/10, pre-arc series
Disclaimer: SM owns the boys of DBSK, I wish I did.

Summary:
"Cause we belong together now, yeah
Forever united here somehow, yeah
You've got a piece of me,
and honestly,
My life would SUCK without you."

My Life Would Suck Without You - Kelly Clarkson

A/N: OH shit....it's finished. I never thought I would get to this point and yet I never wanted to get to this point. I absolutely adore these characters....so yes, again, I will not stop the Breathless Romance one-shots...they will keep coming. ^-^ The last chapter of this pre-arc I have had in my head for so damn long it was just WONDERFUL to get it all out on paper, so this is the longest chapter...YAY! Anyways, I hope you all love this last chapter, and to all of you who have read all the way through, THANK YOU SO MUCH! Without your support, my readers, I would probably never write again. Your comments give me such strength, thank you so much!



You felt the ache before you moved, the slight pang of sore muscles right near your groin, trailing through your thighs to end in your buttocks, all strained from the night before.
Warm, winter sunshine streamed through the blue filmy curtains of your bedroom, your sensitive eyes adjusting quickly to your haphazard surroundings.
You gazed around the room, laughing silently to yourself as you noticed the knocked over chair, the one ripped curtain, and the few open packets of condoms strewn across your once clean living space.
Leaning your head back down upon your pillow you sighed in contentment, happiness and jubilation skipping through your mind and soul like jumping jelly-beans, leaving the smile on your face and adding an extra throb to your heart.
Your skin still tingled from his touch, your lips still felt slightly swollen, your senses flaming alight with his scent and taste.
You looked over, smiling as your eyes landed upon his, chocolaty brown swimming back into your memory, “Good morning.”
He blinked, “Morning...”
You cleared your throat, “How long have you been awake?”
He shrugged, the sheets covering his lower body trailing down his creamy hips, “Probably about 10 minutes.”
You nodded, not really knowing what to say.
It was so peaceful, you didn't want to disturb the perfection, wrestle with the underlying questions you knew had to be answered.
It had to last, just a few minutes longer.
Just a few seconds longer.
To be able to look at his face, eyes staring into yours, and know that everything was as it should be.
“I was watching you sleep.” he said suddenly, finger absently scratching his nose.
“You....oh really?” you asked, only minimally surprised, “Was I drooling?”
He smiled, bright and unwavering, “Only a little.”
You rolled your eyes, “Oh great.”
His following laugh made butterfly tingles shoot strait to your heart, how could anyone be this enamoring at whatever god awful time of the morning?
Apparently he was one of the lucky few who were.
Lifting your arms above your head for a long, leisurely stretch, you rolled over, bringing your weight to lay upon his chest and stomach, legs straddling his.
His warm palms landed flat against the small of your back, one trailing slightly closer to tickle the crack of your ass.
Bending forward, positioning one hand next to his ear, you dragged your closed lips over his, bumping the tip of your nose on his cheeks, caressing his stomach with your other set of fingers.
The kiss was tender, soft, and comforting, a pact silently made for the deal of a lifetime.
Sign on the dotted line, your heart, mind, and home-bound soul...this was it.
The kiss may not have been passionate or lustful, but it spoke.
It spoke like a whisper.
More words than in a book, more verses than in a song.
It trilled and rippled it's way around your lips and down to your heart, sealing the rip that had begun to start.

…..................................................................................


“I guess this means we are boyfriends now right?” you asked while Yunho slowly brought chocolate to a boil on the stove in your kitchen.
He nodded, “Well, usually when two people date for a few months, have sex at least twice a day, and kiss each other constantly when in each other's presence, it kind of makes them a couple by default.”
You chuckled, kicking your feet out from underneath your bent knees, wincing slightly as they hit against the maple cupboards below the counter you sat upon.
“Yunho and Changmin, boyfriends...” you pondered, smiling, “I like the sound of that.”
Yunho turned towards you, his eyes sparkling with adoration, “I quite like it as well.”
“I wonder what our fans think.” he asked, bringing the chocolate covered spoon up to his mouth to test the quickly melting sweets.
“I am pretty damn sure they are happier than we are at the prospect.” you stated, smirking, “Did you notice the insanely large fandom of DBSK couplings while we were active?”
He nodded, “I noticed it, I just never thought to much about it...”
“Oh come on!” you pouted, “YunJae was fucking everywhere! It still is the most popular of the pairings.”
Yunho chuckled, setting the spoon in the pot, walking to stand in-between your opened legs, “Are you jealous?”
“A little...I mean...Jaejoong is really handsome.” you admitted, blushing, “You two would go very well together.”
You watched as he smiled, then slowly shook his head, “Yeah Jaejoong is handsome, but I always had the feelings for you.” he leaned in, kissing the exposed neck that peeked out from under your faded SM Town 2008 t-shirt, “Always got a little excited every time you walked my way.” He kissed your cheek, “Always felt the need to protect you when you were sad or angry.” Another kiss to your opposite cheek, “Always endured the pain of you, one day, rejecting me.”
Sighing with pent up passion, you kissed him properly on the lips, closing your eyes and wrapping your arms around his neck, twirling your tongue through the flavors of chocolate and saliva.
“You need to stop being so fucking perfect all the time. I would never reject you...and...” you stated, pulling away from his stimulating mouth, “Stop making me love you.”
He pulled away, your arms slipping down his shoulders, confusion and happiness mixed in a dizzy swirl around his face, “Did you....did you just say you love me?”
You nodded, silently bending your head to the floor, instantly more interested in the shining wax on the linoleum than his brilliantly beautiful eyes.
Never before had you stated those words to anyone.
No one had earned the right to hear them.
Yet with Yunho, you knew the admittance needed to be said.
Ever since that night on the roof in the early days of the band, you knew, deep in the bowels of your heart, that he was special.
The feelings were just too much to hide and stuff away into the back corners of your mind.
You had always loved him.
You had always wanted him.
Now that you had him, you only felt the need for him grow stronger than before.
“Yes Yunho...I...” you swallowed a chunk of nervous spit, “I am pretty damn sure I love you.”
An exhale, loud and clear.
“Changmin look at me.” he whispered into your brown hair, lips tickling your scalp as you moved to stare into his smiling face, “You know what.....” he paused, bringing your mouth a breaths width from his,

“I am pretty damn sure I love you even more.”

…........................................................................


“Come on Min it's your birthday, go out....have some fun!” your assistant chimed as she sat files upon your large, messy desk, her long black hair tied in a frantic ponytail. “I can handle everything!”
You shook your head, “I'm sorry SaeLee but I just can't. Thank you for the offer though.” you sighed, rubbing your tired eyes with sore fingers, “Go ahead and go home, it's Friday and it's already past your payment hours....just go.”
She seemed to want to protest, but if she knew you, and she did, she knew not to argue, “Fine I'll go ahead and go home....but you have to promise to leave in the next hour Mr. Shim! Having a life is a good thing!”
You chuckled, waving your palm towards the door, “Yes, I know, thank you SaeLee, see you Monday.”
“Byeee.” she sang, shutting the door with a slam and a burst of magnolia perfume.
Focusing once more on your paperwork, pen sifting through paper, you worked for another few minutes, your feet bouncing in anticipation of being done.
You wanted to go home, but the money you were getting for the new girl group's album had to be signed off by you, and only after you read and noted all of the bank's loan contracts, the company's trademark policies, and last year's copyright laws.
It was boring.
This was the worst part of your job.
Note to self:
You should have hired more accountants.
“Working late?” a voice proclaimed, startling you enough that your pen flew haphazardly across the desk as you jumped.
“Holy shit Yunho!” you gasped, rolling your eyes, “I love you but do you have to get all ninja on me?”
He shrugged, his long black winter coat hanging off his shoulders, “More fun that way.”
A smirk slinked predatory dark across his cheeks, “I like watching you squirm.”
You cleared your throat, was he kidding?
“So what are you here for?” you asked, pretending to shuffle papers on your desk, trying not notice the way he swaggered sexily up beside you, coat jacket falling open to reveal his bare and muscular chest.
“Can't a guy come see his boyfriend?” he asked as his fingers flipped through the documents on your desk, his warm, musky scent filling your nostrils.
You nodded, a blush creeping up your cheeks as he leaned over your desk beside you, palms flat against the paper covered wood, “Yeah, you can always come see me, it's just...it's so late.” you added, laughing slightly, “And your shirt seems to be missing.”
“One, you love me shirtless, and two, it being late makes my plan all the easier to accomplish.” he said silently, grabbing the back of your chair and spinning it to face his front, “Is anyone else here?”
“Uhm...” you stuttered, too stunned by Yunho's half-naked chest underneath his open jacket to comprehend questions, “Yeah, I think on the next floor down.”
“Good.” he said, smashing his lips passionately down onto yours, tongue thrusting eagerly into your open mouth.
Surprise pooled into your face, eyes alight with curiosity and lustful fire as Yunho's tongue found yours, roaming in wonderful circles around your smooth insides.
You moaned, your palm creeping up to rest against his smooth, bare upper chest, fingers caressing a budded nipple and creamy caramel skin.
Lips never leaving yours, Yunho shrugged off his jacket, the rough black fabric slipping with a thump to the floor and your eyes roamed happily over his chest and jagged hip-bones protruding from underneath his low-riding jeans.
Pulling away with a loud and sexual pop, Yunho glared at you, his eyes pools of inky passion, “Stand up and sit on your desk.”
You did as you were told, sitting only the edge of your butt against the smooth edge of your work-desk, your brain muddled by lust.
“Now spread your legs.” he demanded, his eyes glinting in the low light of the desk lamps as he looked you up and down.
You felt like a hunter's prey.
He smiled, yet it wasn't in jubilation, “Pull out your cock.”
You once again did as you were told, slowly undoing your fly and pushing down the front of your underwear to release your now hard and red erection from between the folds of your pants.
Yunho licked his brilliantly pink lips, the two mounds looking deliciously moist and supple soft, the insistant need to bite them flowing fast and sweet through your veins.
Leading your hand to your dick you started to pull, your fingers trailing the leaking pre-cum down the sides and up around the crown.
“Stop.” you heard Yunho protest, whining as you reluctantly followed his instructions.
What was he trying to do?
Was he kidding?
Heat surged through you just by looking at him, you had to relieve yourself or die from an over-haul of desire.
You were like a full cup of water ready to spill over the brim of the glass.
You whined once again, hoping that would push Yunho into doing something physical instead of standing and staring in his still position.
It seemed as though he had read your mind as he walked forward, kneeling down on the floor and taking you into his hot and saliva slick mouth.
You bit back a scream as his tongue immediately ran up the underside of your length, wet warmth trailing over your sensitive skin.
“Oh...oh shit....aaahhh....” you stuttered as Yunho sucked lightly on the head, dipping the tip of his tongue into your cock's weeping hole. “Oh my...mother of god...”
Pleasure almost burst fourth from Yunho's constant attention to detail, his eyes looking up at you reflecting only wanton lust and overwhelming satisfaction at your having made such pleading, begging noises.
He hummed delightfully, the vibrations tickling their way through your groin as his chin sank to touch your curling pubic hair.
Biting your fist, you threw back your head, no longer able to watch as Yunho delved and thrusted his mouth up and down your raging red dick.
Sweat rolled down your back beneath your clothing, the slick drops catching in your shirt and sticking it to your back as your thighs shook and quivered against Yunho's open hands holding your hips still.
He pulled up, his mouth making a lurid squelching sound, saliva trailing from his lower lip to the tip of your cock, “Yummy.”
You sighed in passion as his exhaled breaths caressed you over-heated member with a silky embrace, your focus coming forward to look down at Yunho's naughtily smiling face.
He licked his lips as you watched him go back down onto your cock, your hands splaying and curling into his wildly coiffed hair.
You were so close...oh so delightfully close.
Yunho must have felt you stiffen, his mouth stilling as he stood, his lips coming down harsh upon yours.
You could taste yourself, salty and bitter upon his tongue.
“Cum...” he whispered, licking the shell of your ear, “Let me feel it on my chest...”
Rubbing yourself against his stomach, his abs slick, you finally hit the peak, splattering hot, wet seed up and over his belly button and against his caramel nipples, the white contrasting with his tan skin.
You rode out your orgasm, humping your pumping cock against his half-naked body, his eyes never leaving yours as your head fell back, exposing your tempting neck.
Panting hard, your chest raising and falling rhythmically, you asked, “What the hell was that!”
Yunho smirked, grabbing you and kissing you softly on the lips before he grabbed his coat and started walking to the office door.
Brain still laden with desire and a fading orgasm, you heard him huskily murmur,
“Happy Birthday.”


FEW MONTHS LATER

“MINNIE!” Jaejoong screamed, jumping into your arms, his red streaked hair and faded black jeans all a jumble of color around your irises.
“Do you really have to call me Minnie?” you asked as Jaejoong pulled from the intense hug, moving so two more embraces from Junsu and the following Yoochun could be received.
“I call you Minnie out of love and affection.” Jaejoong chuckled while Yoochun finished up with the usual back clap and front hand grab. “And you know you love it deep down in that heart of yours.”
You turned to Yunho who had already gone through the grouping hugs, “Tell me again...why did we come here?”
He chuckled, comforting hand resting on your hip, “Because they are our friends and band-mates and it was your idea to have a get together in the first place.”
“Was it really MY idea?” you asked sarcastically, Yunho replying with an arch of groomed eyebrows, “Shit it was....ugh, you should have stopped me.”
“Changmin, Yunho welcome!” Jaejoong's wife shouted from the kitchen, her pregnant belly round and cheerful beneath her layered sun-dress. “I made everyone some soup, I hope you both don't mind.”
You smiled, watching as she quickly turned the heat down on the stove, “No, no, it should be fine, thanks.”
Walking into Jaejoong's spacious living room, you led yourselves to the nearest couch and sat down, taking in the futuristic furniture, steel appliances, and white accents all leading to the wonderfully beautiful and artistically colorful wall-size painting hanging above the fireplace mantel.
“Who did the painting?” Yunho asked of Jaejoong as said man grabbed two hard lemonades, bringing them over for them both to sip on.
“Who do you think?” Jaejoong stated, his loving eyes looking upon his blushing and apparently embarrassed wife.
“It's a beautiful painting.” Yunho stated to no-one in particular, not wanting to embarrass Jaejoong's wife any further. “Anyways....how's everything been going with your solo stuff Junsu?”
Junsu shrugged as he fingered a chip full of salsa, “Meh....it's been fine, I mean, can't complain about selling a good amount of albums and filling up concerts.”
“Sounds like it's more than fine!” you shouted incredulously, the smile hitting your lips telling him it was a joke, “I should know, you are my top seller's competition.”
Jaejoong turned, surprise overlooking his face, “I'm your top seller?”
You nodded and Jaejoong seemed so puffed with pride you feared he might explode.
“Okay so before we inflate Jaejoong's ego more than his safety instructions allow, let's move on and talk about the wonderful and talented....me.” Yoochun said, the smug smirk befalling his features making you want to hit him with your lemonade bottle.
You rolled your eyes, “Okay...I'll bite....how are you Yoochun?”
He smiled, “I just sold the contracts to a song I composed for $15,000.”
You felt your eyes start to bug from your skull, “You are fucking me!”
He shook his head, “Nope, total truth.”
“Shit then next time we go out you're buying.” Junsu added, mouth full of nacho chips.
Yoochun sighed, “Yeah because you are still as stingy as ever.”
You nodded and added, “You can't use those angel eyes to sway people anymore...now that you're like....thirty it's a little creepy.”
“Shut up, I am not stingy.” Junsu scoffed, checking his back pocket to make sure his wallet was actually still there.
“Yeah not stingy at all.” Yunho replied sarcastically, taking a long gulp from his bottle, the movements of his throat made you think of him swallowing quite a different type of liquid.
You squirmed a bit in your seat.
“So Yunho,” Jaejoong started, finally sitting down along the length of the couch opposite yours across the room, cold lemonade in hand, “How's the dance studio going?”
Yunho shrugged, bottle swaying in his hand, “It's going well, just putting down the finishing touches on the front desk area, will be moving on to the back area probably in the next week or so.”
Yoochun nodded in acknowledgment as Junsu 'hmm'd his appreciation of Yunho's hard work, his usually open mouth being covered by the lemonade bottle.
You could feel Yunho moving against you before you actually saw him get up and leave the room, his steps leading him to the bathroom you knew was around the hall.
After a few minutes of waiting for his return, you had a feeling something was wrong, and excused yourself from between the hoots and hollers of your ex band-mates.
Finding the door to the bathroom unlocked, you walked in to find Yunho, sitting and wallowing on the shut toilet seat, head in his hands.
“Yunho, hey what's wrong?” you asked, kneeling down to pull his hands off his floor aimed eyes.
He looked up at you, his face strewn with confusion and a pang of jealousy.
“Nothing's really...wrong per se.” he replied, rubbing his palms together between his knees, “It's just....god next to them I feel so damn second rate.”
You shook your head, “Why would you feel that way at all?”
“It's just....they all still make lots of money, their jobs are all set in stone, and they all seem to have their life strait.” he cleared his throat, “And it seems like I am personally stuck in this constant phase between the time I was a star and now to where I am a fucking nobody.”
“Well I will say this,” you began, taking a hand and rubbing his knee in soft, slow circles, “You bought a lot and built a studio that you designed from the ground up....a feat that many of us little people could never accomplish without a suicide pact.” you watched as he nodded slowly in agreement, “Also, you then began the arduous task of painting and designing the entire interior, plus you also started teaching a girl group your own choreographed dance moves for a song you only heard once.” he smiled, a small one, but one nonetheless, “Then to top this all off, you decided to help me realize how much I really fucking need you, and made Shim Changmin, the baby boy of DBSK, your boyfriend.” his glittering eyes made your breath catch as he looked up into your face, “And if I do say so myself, you make one hell of a great boyfriend!”
He laughed silently, his lips coming to land upon your forehead, lingering with a small, yet sweet, kiss near your temple.
“I don't deserve you.” he whispered, his breath sending shivers down your spine.
You shook your head once again, “No, I think it's me who doesn't deserve you...actually.”
H sighed, his hands trailing down your arms, “Shit...if we weren't at Jaejoong's house...”
“You'd what?” you asked, wiggling your eyebrows.
Yunho's gaze hardened, the lust overpowering the brown of his irises, “I'd make love to you right here on this toilet.”
“Always the romantic.” you replied sarcastically, kissing him quickly on the lips and pulling you both to your feet. “How about we go back?”
He nodded, “Sounds good.”
You opened the door, one hand still clasped in his as you walked back to the loud living room.
“Hey the two love-birds are back from nesting!” Yoochun cried, his lemonade laying finished near his chair.
“You guys better not have done anything raunchy in there.” Jaejoong pipped, “My wife lives here too you know.”
You rolled your eyes, “Yes, Yunho and I had hot, sweaty, monkey sex all over your nice marble counters.”
Yunho smiled, “We'll send you the photos.”
Jaejoong scoffed, “Very funny assholes.”
“So are you two like...officially a couple now?” Junsu asked, curiosity peaking.
You turned to face Yunho, watching as he did the same to you.
You both smiled.
You felt his pulse quicken in your entwined hands.
The answer seemed so natural. So right.
Turning back to Junsu, you smiled and said,

“Yeah, yeah, I think we are.”

OWARI
THE END
FIN


As always, comments loved and appreciated with all my heart! ^-^
 
 
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나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOWfiat_amorfati on February 17th, 2009 05:30 am (UTC)
KYAH~~~~~~~ I don't want to read it. I don't want this to end. I know you gonna write more one-shots but... OMG~ I'm being such a drama queen.

*takes a peek*
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 17th, 2009 05:38 am (UTC)
*watches you read it*

I hope you like it!
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOWfiat_amorfati on February 17th, 2009 05:50 am (UTC)
YAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CARDIAC ARREST. (OH GOD, I TYPED ERECT INSTEAD XD)

the knocked over chair, the one ripped curtain, and the few open packets of condoms strewn across your once clean living space.
Did anyone recorded that? giggles at usage of condoms. Safe sex should practiced even if its a fanfic XD

The kiss was tender, soft, and comforting, a pact silently made for the deal of a lifetime.
Sign on the dotted line, your heart, mind, and home-bound soul...this was it.
The kiss may not have been passionate or lustful, but it spoke.
It spoke like a whisper.
More words than in a book, more verses than in a song.

How did you come up with the most poetic lines? I swear this is one of the many reasons why I love this verse, homin feels so damn realistic.

“And your shirt seems to be missing.”
The person who invented clothes should be shot. Both of them should be naked at all times!!!! 8D

You rode out your orgasm, humping your pumping cock against his half-naked body, his eyes never leaving yours as your head fell back, exposing your tempting neck.
Panting hard, your chest raising and falling rhythmically, you asked, “What the hell was that!”

YES, WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?????? I was expecting min topping, his birthday an all but gyah~ Yunho you kinky bastard!!!! I make sure Min will make you comfortable being open about it *shakes fists*

You rolled your eyes, “Yes, Yunho and I had hot, sweaty, monkey sex all over your nice marble counters.”
min!snark, how I missed you so *clings*

I can die happy now. You will write me more one-shots, right? RIGHT? RIGHT?????? Seeing that banner on my f-page always makes me happy. happy. happy. 8D

ILY, I can't say that enough *huggles*
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 17th, 2009 05:55 am (UTC)
ILU TOO!!!!! *huggles back*

You really need to friend my personal journal if you haven't already...you are just too awesome to me!

Your comment was sooo long I loved it long time! ^-^

AHAHAHA, I am sooo happy that you loved the ending! I was so worried that everyone wouldn't be happy with it and stuff and yeah.

No one knows what Yunho was thinking...but he wanted Minnie to be surprised on his birthday...what a nice surprise eh?
나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOWfiat_amorfati on February 17th, 2009 06:33 am (UTC)
LOL, I'll do that. :D

You deserves long incoherent comments with quote backs. :D

Anything you write makes me happy, really! It's a perfect ending for a beginning. *squishes homin*

I'm so inlove with them it's not even funny. I'm... I'm going to print this out and read it over and over again *cries*

Dayum, we gotta make Yunho kinky. Somehow, because he has it in him. Changmin with the chaps totally proves that XD
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:09 pm (UTC)
Gotta make Yunho kinky? Didn't that last bit there just prove his kinkiness? LOL!

Your going to print it out! AH, don't waste your paper on my fanfiction! >.< LOL!

나는 KEEPITLOW 나는 KEEPITLOWfiat_amorfati on February 19th, 2009 03:28 am (UTC)
Kinkier Yunho then? XD

Don't worry, I will print them on both side of the page to save the trees ♥
realitywaiting on February 17th, 2009 05:30 am (UTC)
I SAW BANNER AND WENT YAY!!! *READS*
realitywaiting on February 17th, 2009 05:31 am (UTC)
*pouts...pokes une_topaze*
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 17th, 2009 05:39 am (UTC)
I saw your comment and went "YAY!"
realitywaiting on February 17th, 2009 05:55 am (UTC)
one step to slow at getting first! Meh! Anyway! I Absolutely LOVED this! I just loved reading how they got together! and and and...KYAH! *spazzes* just LOVE LOVE LOVE ALL OVER THE PLACE!!! ♥♥♥♥♥
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the end of the beginning! awesome awesome! would be interesting to see if there was any drama in deciding to move in together...hint? XD ♥
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 17th, 2009 06:04 am (UTC)
Move in sex....sounds promising. *giggles*

I am sooo sooo happy you loved it! HAPPY DAYS FOR ME!

Yes, the end of one story, but the beginning of another, just the way I like it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Stephanietheresa_lynne on February 17th, 2009 05:54 am (UTC)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

That was so cute. And hot and cute and hot... I can't make up my mind. XD <3
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 17th, 2009 06:06 am (UTC)
Hotcute....new word I made it.

*huggles you* I am glad you can't make up your mind!
Yuxiyuxo on February 17th, 2009 06:15 am (UTC)
CONGRATULATIONS ON FINISHING!! :DDDDD ♥ :3

awww, darling, you KNOW how much i love this! XD i swear to god every time i'm here i feel this insane urge to tell you how much i love prequels and how much i love THIS prequel. XD rofl salkdfjkjfd and you do it so well, lemme tell you that!! :D

it's so sad and yet so satisfying to finish, right? :) so hard to let go of a baby you've bled and torn your hair out for, and yet, to see it finished is just...there aren't even words for it. so once again, congratulations!! i'm happy to hear that you won't stop this series! i think that chapter fics suit your purpose very well so i do hope you continue like this one. :D

okay, i seriously lol-ed at the though of yunho in a long trench with nothing under. he WOULD be such a flasher asldkjfsdkfj HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'M DYING AGAIN THINKING ABOUT IT. XDDDD oh yunho. ♥ he's just so special.

but i loved their little talk in the bathroom. :') yunho's the sweetest thing alive, but changmin...ah, changmin's just in a whole other class of his own. :') he may not be full of fluffy words but he's so truthful and honest with his feelings that you can't help but fall in love with him. he speaks from his heart and who could ask for anything more than that? :')

i love jaejoong. i seriously need to see where i can get me one of those. :llll

i'm in love with them so happily in love. :')



i hope you're struck with inspiration once again and very soon! :D :3 congratulations once more, darling. :3
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 17th, 2009 06:29 am (UTC)
YUXO...MY LOVE! *glomps*

Anyways....Thank you so much for reading and commenting on all my chapters, and being such a wonderful fellow writer. (Who I am still sure writes WAY hotter pron than I do. XD)

It's terrible to finish something you are so attached to...yet your happy anyways...

If you want a Jaejoong, you need to ask me and then maybe I can include him more in future one-shots. XD

I try to make my characters as close to the real boys as possible, with as much as I know about them, so that the story seems real and not contrived. I am glad that you noticed that part. ^0^

Thank you so so much!
Yuxiyuxo on February 17th, 2009 06:37 am (UTC)
ahahaha, goodness, you're such a sweetheart. XD ♥ i would love to see you continue writing more for them!! :D it makes me so happy to come on the comm and see that you've updated for precious homin couple! :'DDDD!!

♥ here's to seeing you real soon! :D :3 ♥
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:08 pm (UTC)
I am telling the truth though! Your pron is soooo damn hot all the time, so then mine looks mediocre compared to yours! XD

You will see me soon, I promise!
紫のチャンミン: MinHo smtown korea 2008kurogoma on February 17th, 2009 10:33 am (UTC)
“Yunho and Changmin, boyfriends...” you pondered, smiling, “I like the sound of that.”

i love the sound of this too...really, really do. ♥

this is a perfect chapter. from how they had their sweet affirming morning-after, changmin asking about being boyfriends in such an innocent, tentative way, and the way they confess that they love each other...just awesome.

and just when i thought it was all over, yunhoyou gave min a very very nice, very sexy birthday present.

and the convo in the bathroom, these two have come a long way from band days.

i hope you never stop writing homin in such a positive lovely manner.

♥♥♥♥ :D
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:02 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much!

Yes, those two have come such a long way, growing up and all that fun stuff!

I will probably never stop writing HoMin, or at least I won't stop writing it until the fandom leaves my life. ^-^

Thank you so much for sticking with me the whole way and always commenting.
[Land Min's UFO's Here]toma_love on February 17th, 2009 03:21 pm (UTC)
now that this is done... i'm going to start reading the whole series lol... do you have a masterlist by any chance or is it just by tags that i need to go...

and so if i'm starting the series from scratch... i should read this one and then go to the actual breathless romance
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)
I do not have a master list, since I, being the dork that I am, have no idea how to make one. LOL!
You will have to use the tags, all under the "breathless romance series". Gomen ne!

If you want you can read this story first and then move on to the one-shots, but you can also read it the other way around...it's a paralell story. ^-^

Thank you for reading and commenting!
[Land Min's UFO's Here]toma_love on February 19th, 2009 01:39 am (UTC)
what do you mean you have no idea lol you just put links up in the order you wrote them silly XD
Yunho's Honey Funny Bunnykuro_wolf on February 17th, 2009 04:02 pm (UTC)
i cant believe its over!!
It was soo freakin' awesome dude!!
And the birthday present from Yunho, H-A-W-T!!!
Dont stop writing this couple kay? They are my 2nd fav, but still fav. XD
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:04 pm (UTC)
Yes it's over! *cries*

I am happy it was awesome, awesome is a good status to be under!

I won't stop writing this couple, promise!

Thank you for reading and commenting!
★ ☆ ★ r e i: sm; changminbeatinlove on February 18th, 2009 12:07 am (UTC)
awwww they're so cute. and hot *0* ah i loved this so much. ♥
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:05 pm (UTC)
I am pleased you loved it!

Thank you for reading and commenting!
zelshamada: Horo smile!zelshamada on February 18th, 2009 01:44 am (UTC)
This is my heart in this moment. Really. ALL MY HEART.

I love this history. All the saga. I mean it. It's just the perfect romance and they are SO they; The first "I love you" from Minnie, knowing the little that we know, can be like this. And Yunho too!

I'm so sappy now! It's just that... It's finished! Now what? Re-read?! (Hell YEAH!)

^^ I'll be waiting for more! I can't stop my mind for the imagen of Yunho bringing all his stuff to Minnie's apartment (well, it's just that I imagined all the post-fics in Changmin's --don't know why...). *sigh* I love this boys...

You create a beutiful history. Really, you're a great writter. Thank you so much for let us read you.
perriwynkkleperriwynkkle on February 18th, 2009 07:06 pm (UTC)
PIE HEART!!!

*clings to you* YOU LOVE THE WHOLE SAGA!?
I knew there was a reason I kept you. LOL! jk.

Maybe I will write a story about them moving in together...and btw, you are correct. Changmin's apartment is where they live together in the original Breathless Romance. ^-^

Thank you thank you thank you so so very much! I am so pleased you think I am a good writer!

Thank you for your comments and your continous reading!
vampy_82vampy_82 on February 19th, 2009 10:31 am (UTC)
Oh!!! so perfect, so sweet!!! finally... thanks so much for sharing, this was really so romantic, and HOT at the same time...
Bluebluemonkeyrain on August 1st, 2010 02:50 pm (UTC)
HEY YUNHO, SEND ME THOSE PHOTOS! :'DDDD

This whole arc was so effing amazing. I loved how HoMin's relationship blossomed and how realistic it was.

<333